The City in the Lake
Just the Facts: by Rachel Neumeier. 294 p.Published 2008 by Alfred A. Knopf.
Who Cares? YA Fantasy
Short Bio (from Booklist): The City in the Lake is a robust, prosperous kingdom until Prince Cassiel vanishes. Beloved by all, the prince represents the kingdom’s heart, and after his disappearance, life withers throughout the land. In a remote village, 17-year-old Timou’s father, a mage, departs for the city to search for the source of the kingdom’s malaise, and when he doesn’t return, Timou sets off after him. Her journey requires her, for the first time, to draw heavily on her own mage training, and as she circles closer to the kingdom’s mysteries, she finds shocking personal connections and, ultimately, love.
Eyewitness Account: I picked this up because The Book Smugglers both rated this a “9 – Damn near perfection.” Its got a great title (the City IN the Lake?), beautiful cover, and intriguing plot summary. Maybe my expectations were a little too high – I thought it was good, but would have given it a 7 or 8 on the Book Smuggler’s rating scale. Neumeier’s writing is purely beautiful; I had written down 5 different quotes before I even got to chapter 3! The story is engaging, full of interesting characters and a plot that isn’t wholly predictable. However, I finished it with a slight sense of disappointment – the story didn’t feel fully developed. The idea of a single City “anchoring” a multitude of other Cities was a brilliant idea that wasn’t fully fleshed out. Neumeier had some AMAZING content that I think could have been more perfectly and satisfactorily relayed in a longer book (or perhaps expanded into a series). Overall, worth reading for her writing style alone! As this was Neumeier’s first book, I’d imagine her later writings are definitely worth picking up.
“So Timou learned how to catch fire and the memory of fire in glass, how to contain the quick fire in a coal and how to let it loose again, how to find the fire that waited to spring eagerly forth from the heart of dry wood. And how to try again and again to find such fire when at first she could see nothing but wood, trusting that, because her father said it was there, eventually she would find the heart of it that wanted to burn.”
“She loved these books … she loved their heft in the hand, which so contrasted with the brittle fragility of their pages. She loved the graceful or angled or tightly looping scripts that filled those pages.”
“I am not afraid to have this darkness lie before every step I take, because once I saw into darkness and it was glorious. Grieve for your father because you lost him, it’s right we should grieve for those we lose, but don’t grieve for him because he’s here, Timou!”
Other Books Read by This Author: None! Will definitely try “The Floating Islands” next, though.
★★★★☆ Plot Development
★★★★★ Writing Style
★★★★☆ Original Idea
★★★★☆ Page Turner